it's been a while

[chiisuhatake]

'I do not think I should be here.' Thought Chiisu as he neared the burial site of his clan. 'But I need to take the risk, after all, it has been seven long years since I last even saw them.' He was trying to kep the tears from sheding, because he needed to be on the look out for any ninja of his clan. 'Just visit them, say it is my eightteenth birthday, which I hate because it is also Halloween, tell them how I am on my own, and get out.' But as Chiisu neared his mother's grave, he broke down and cried his heart out. Letting his guard down.

[Ikara]

[can i just ask you chiisu. When your character is thinking, can you either italicise it or put it in "" marks. [] is generally used for OCC comments and it gets confusing]