Post by Oyushi on Sept 16, 2007 0:42:16 GMT -5
Ok I figured we really need a main antagonist if we want some good action and a good plot, like in series 1 you have Orochimaru. I thought I'd stick him here first and see what people think. If you like it I'll just transfer this straight across to profiles. Also I would like to play him if you like the idea.
Brilliant
Name: Gurisetzu Nomagi
Age: 30 Years old
Rank: Kage level missing nin
Appearance: Gurisetzu is about average height for a man, at 5' 10”, he is of medium build, not particularly thin or stocky. He is one of the most average looking people you will ever see, he has black hair that falls down past his eyes, olive skin with no freckles or other discernible markings. He has a rather long face and an average nose. Were you to lift his hair however you would notice that he has bright red irises with an evil look to them. Gurisetzu wears a dark brown tactical vest over a black shirt which had long sleeves. He also wears gloves in black with metal knuckle pieces. He has a pair of black trousers on and brown sandals, he also has a kunai holder on his waist. He wears a sand village forehead protector on his right upper arm, it has a deep scratch through the symbol to show his rejection of his village. He walks very stiffly but purposefully and with a lot of power in his strides.
Personality: Gurisetzu is dead serious all of the time. He is never forgiving or understanding. He can not take a joke and it it most probably within his power to kill the joker with ease. He is quite intelligent, he plans things very carefully and assesses all possibilities. He is also rather charismatic, drawing followers to his cause without much trouble at all. However if one of these followers fails him, he would have no hesitation in killing them without compassion. He does not care for anyone or anything but himself and his twisted ideals, ideals that he won't let anyone stand in the way of. He is a very ambitious hard worker, who will put in any amount of work to get what he wants.
History: Gurisetzu began life in the sand village, he was never the most gifted ninja, but he worked incredibly hard day and night to become one of the better academy students. His family never really supported him in this pursuit however making his life all the harder. He was loathsome and jealous of the naturally talented students, who with very little effort stayed ahead of him. He particularly hated those who were gifted with kekkei genkai, bloodline limits, powerful jutsu that they were born with and never had to work for. Gurisetzu was to his disgust, put in a squad with one such ninja however and try as he might, he could never beat the gifted ninja. They managed to not kill each other on a few missions and Gurisetzu became possibly the best genin in the village, he passed the chunin exams easily and progressed on through the ranks, becoming a brutal and hate fill powerful ninja. It was not too long before he graduated to jonin and found that more and more he was thinking that the village's needs were holding him back, so he defected, becoming a missing nin and rejecting the sand village. He heard a legend shortly after leaving the village, a legend that told of one of the original purposes of the shinobi villages. Hidden under each village is an ancient chamber, holding part of an incredibly powerful scroll. This scroll contained how to use a jutsu that allows the user control of time itself. But the scroll was divided into four pieces and each one hidden in secret under one of the villages to keep them safe and seperate. Gurisetzu set his eyes on this scroll and vowed to take it and become the greatest ninja of all time. He knew however that he couldn't just walz in and take it, so he devised a plan, to create his own minor shinobi village and go to the chunin exams to scope out that village. So he created a small village in the mountains, called the village hidden in time. Their symbol will be up here soon. He now is gathering followers to take to the next chunin exam, and put his plan into action. And when he achieves his final goal he will be invincible, he will live forever and be able to defeat any opponent, and he would rule the world as his own.
Special Jutsu:
Iron Hands Jutsu (his own creation): Turns the users forearms and hands to as solid as steel, allowing them to deflect attacks from blades without any worry.
Body flicker jutsu (Normal): He has mastered the body flicker jutsu and uses it constantly to gain a better position from which to fight.
Chemeleon Jutsu (his own creation): The user steps back and becomes literally part of their surroundings allowing them to observe unnoticed or dissappear. Note, this can not be used to walk through walls.
Brilliant
Name: Gurisetzu Nomagi
Age: 30 Years old
Rank: Kage level missing nin
Appearance: Gurisetzu is about average height for a man, at 5' 10”, he is of medium build, not particularly thin or stocky. He is one of the most average looking people you will ever see, he has black hair that falls down past his eyes, olive skin with no freckles or other discernible markings. He has a rather long face and an average nose. Were you to lift his hair however you would notice that he has bright red irises with an evil look to them. Gurisetzu wears a dark brown tactical vest over a black shirt which had long sleeves. He also wears gloves in black with metal knuckle pieces. He has a pair of black trousers on and brown sandals, he also has a kunai holder on his waist. He wears a sand village forehead protector on his right upper arm, it has a deep scratch through the symbol to show his rejection of his village. He walks very stiffly but purposefully and with a lot of power in his strides.
Personality: Gurisetzu is dead serious all of the time. He is never forgiving or understanding. He can not take a joke and it it most probably within his power to kill the joker with ease. He is quite intelligent, he plans things very carefully and assesses all possibilities. He is also rather charismatic, drawing followers to his cause without much trouble at all. However if one of these followers fails him, he would have no hesitation in killing them without compassion. He does not care for anyone or anything but himself and his twisted ideals, ideals that he won't let anyone stand in the way of. He is a very ambitious hard worker, who will put in any amount of work to get what he wants.
History: Gurisetzu began life in the sand village, he was never the most gifted ninja, but he worked incredibly hard day and night to become one of the better academy students. His family never really supported him in this pursuit however making his life all the harder. He was loathsome and jealous of the naturally talented students, who with very little effort stayed ahead of him. He particularly hated those who were gifted with kekkei genkai, bloodline limits, powerful jutsu that they were born with and never had to work for. Gurisetzu was to his disgust, put in a squad with one such ninja however and try as he might, he could never beat the gifted ninja. They managed to not kill each other on a few missions and Gurisetzu became possibly the best genin in the village, he passed the chunin exams easily and progressed on through the ranks, becoming a brutal and hate fill powerful ninja. It was not too long before he graduated to jonin and found that more and more he was thinking that the village's needs were holding him back, so he defected, becoming a missing nin and rejecting the sand village. He heard a legend shortly after leaving the village, a legend that told of one of the original purposes of the shinobi villages. Hidden under each village is an ancient chamber, holding part of an incredibly powerful scroll. This scroll contained how to use a jutsu that allows the user control of time itself. But the scroll was divided into four pieces and each one hidden in secret under one of the villages to keep them safe and seperate. Gurisetzu set his eyes on this scroll and vowed to take it and become the greatest ninja of all time. He knew however that he couldn't just walz in and take it, so he devised a plan, to create his own minor shinobi village and go to the chunin exams to scope out that village. So he created a small village in the mountains, called the village hidden in time. Their symbol will be up here soon. He now is gathering followers to take to the next chunin exam, and put his plan into action. And when he achieves his final goal he will be invincible, he will live forever and be able to defeat any opponent, and he would rule the world as his own.
Special Jutsu:
Iron Hands Jutsu (his own creation): Turns the users forearms and hands to as solid as steel, allowing them to deflect attacks from blades without any worry.
Body flicker jutsu (Normal): He has mastered the body flicker jutsu and uses it constantly to gain a better position from which to fight.
Chemeleon Jutsu (his own creation): The user steps back and becomes literally part of their surroundings allowing them to observe unnoticed or dissappear. Note, this can not be used to walk through walls.
What do you guys think?