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Post by amaya on Feb 18, 2008 11:58:43 GMT -5
A black-haired boy was walking round the streets. It was one of those random days when Tako had nothing to do. His grandparents went out and he decided to take a walk. He was in deep thoughts.
"I wonder what will happened today?" He said quietly. "It's kinda quiet when Amaya isn't around." He added smiling at the thought of his hyper cousin. "Maybe I will meet somebody." He discussed with no-one.
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Post by melissa on Mar 28, 2008 10:09:24 GMT -5
Young girl was wandering around Sand village. Rena had long hair in a ponytail. Her gaze was fixed on a sky and she looked a bit dreamy.
Then something caught Rena's attention. A boy about her age was standing in front of her. Rena looked at him curiously. He was looking a bit familiar or just reminded her on someone.
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Post by Ikara on Mar 28, 2008 17:47:03 GMT -5
[pointers on the word count guys - Amaya's ok as she's around 75 but Melissa, you're barely over 60 - new rule is 100 words!
Try and make your posts more descriptive!
Instead of saying "her eyes were fixed on the sky", how about describing the sky. Is it cloudy or is it clear; is it dark or is it bright? how are they feeling? that kind of thing can make your Rping 100x better"]
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Post by amaya on Mar 30, 2008 13:12:39 GMT -5
(Thanks for telling me ^-^)
Tako suddenly realized that a girl was looking at him curiously. Tako felt a little uneasy, he wasn't use people to stare at him. He never liked being the center of attention and now this girl was looking at him. Tako had always had something against girls. They were to loud, some talked to much or just giggled stupidly whenever he went by. He never truly understood girls and he wasn't really anxious to to do.
The girl still watched him and Tako began to feel irritation over-flew him.
"May I help you?" He asked bored, directing his question at the girl.
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