Ivory,memrel

[ivory]

Name:Ivory
Age:17
Gender:female
Rank:missing-nin
Appearance: white hair with grey tips stops at shoulders and bangs that stop at her chest. she covers her right eye with her hair only to let her left eye shows.What she wears is pants and a shirt that looks like tentens but black, and the pants look like jeans but grey and white.she wears her head band on her hip,((ooc okay so the reason why she has the her hair like that is becuase she has a scar over her eye ^^))she has a double sided sword one of the blades eat chacra (sp)

personality: she's calm all the time unlse you get her upset or mad, she doen't like to draw intanshon(sp) to her self and likes to hide and peek on people when ever she can when she touches peoples forheads she can learn there abilitys and shortly they die.((ooc okay so that thing that i said was going down her familly blood line for years and so every one hundred years i female baybe gets this power ><)) she likes to fight and steal.


background: she has lived on her own since she was eight,when she was five her parents gave her away to a man who beat her and gave her that scar over her eye, she ran away from him when she was eight she would steal from random stores to get food and build
a house/cabin to live in ever since then she has killed everyone who gets her mad or trys to kill her.

[Kaede]

Firstly, would you mind changing her name to something more Asian?

I'd like a little more info in personality and background. Sometimes you contradict yourself, like how she's so calm mostly, yet kills anyone else who just makes her angry.

If she's a missing-nin, where did she come from? You forgot to give me a village.

Why did her parents give her to an abusive man?

Also... you might want to read the bottom of the Basic Rules. ^^;

[Ikara]

Oh god not another missing Nin! Seriously, are there any OC's out there who aren't missing nin? (total hypocrite lol)

[ivory]

okay i will and to tell you her parents were ninja in the sand and leaf but they gave birth to her out of any village... and they hoped that there first born child was going to be a boy and thats why she was given up ><

[ivory]

Brilliant
Name:Kirumoshi
Age:17
Gender:female
Rank:missing-nin
Appearance: white hair with grey tips stops at shoulders and bangs that stop at her chest. she covers her right eye with her hair only to let her left eye shows.What she wears is pants and a shirt that looks like tentens but black, and the pants look like jeans but grey and white.she wears her head band on her hip,((ooc okay so the reason why she has the her hair like that is because she has a scar over her eye ^^))she has a double sided sword one of the blades eat chacra (sp)

personality: she's calm all the time because she would always be on her own. unless you get her upset or mad, she doesn't like to draw intension to her self and likes to hide and spy on people((ooc not perv way like to see if anyone is coming to find her)) when ever she can when she touches peoples foreheads she can learn there ability and shortly they die.((ooc okay so that thing that i said was going down her family blood line for years and so every one hundred years a female baby gets this power ><)) she likes to fight and steal.


background: she has lived on her own since she was eight,when she was five her parents gave her away to a man who beat her and gave her that scar over her eye, she ran away from him when she was eight she would steal from random stores to get food and build
a house/cabin to live in ever since then she has killed everyone who gets her mad or trys to kill her.Before she was five her mother and father would try to ignore her they would always leave her at the house by her self where she would try to plan another way to make her parents love her.when she was given to the man she had to build and work night and day for him when ever she didn't listen to him he would hit her with a whip.

[Kaede]

Accepted. ^^

[ivory]

thanx ^^