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Post by darkridr on Sept 8, 2007 16:01:08 GMT -5
Brilliant
Name: Kyo Atsuki
Age: 13
Rank: Genin
Village: Leaf
Appearance: Kyo is tall and skinny, with medium length red hair in a mess. He is pale, and wears glasses. He is left handed, so he wears his kunai pocket is on his left leg. He wears a loose fitting dark green jacket and black full length pants. His headband is tied according to regulation on his forehead. He has a very narrow face.
Personality: Kyo is very intelligent. He tends to keep to himself. At times he can be short tempered at times. He has few friends, but the ones he does have, he tends to cling to. He can be a very suspicious person at times. Around people, he is very quiet.
Background: Kyo was born to a middle class family. His mother is a medical nin, and his father is a Jonin. He is an only child. At the Academy, his teacher was Iruka. He made high marks in ninjutsu and genjutsu, but almost flunked in taijutsu. He is an excellent strategist in the heat of battle. His mission experience consists of 31 D ranks, and 5 C ranks.
What do you think?
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Post by Kaede on Sept 9, 2007 12:53:36 GMT -5
First, check the bottom of the Basic Rules. ^^
Also, his sensei cannot be Kurenai. Remember in the rules when I said that we must respect the Naruto plot?
But anyway... the rest is good, if maybe the slight need for a little more detail.
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Post by darkridr on Sept 10, 2007 17:44:32 GMT -5
Better?
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Post by Kaede on Sept 10, 2007 18:03:16 GMT -5
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